I chose to focus on one, which was the one where we wrote as a person or object inside the painting. The painting I chose to use, was Starry Night by Vincent van Gogh. I have always been intrigued by his paintings, how he uses his brush strokes, and forms everything together with different colors colliding. I chose to write my poem using an object in the painting, the tall black figure on the left side of the painting. I chose an object instead of the other two types of writing poems, because I felt like that poem was more interesting, and had more emotion and feeling, because it was something in the painting, talking about the painting, rather than someone on the outside, telling what they see. It feels more real to me.
Here is the link to the painting:
I found this painting in on the website of The Museum of Modern Art in New York, NY.
Now, here is my poem:
Light in the Night
From the flickering
stars above me,
to the buildings that
sleep below...
every breath of wind
and structure in between...
To the grass that
whispers in the breeze
and up to the highest belfry...
the hillsides in the distance
in the stillness of the night...
I see it all.
Because I tower over it,
and from above me
I see the starry, starry sky
giving the town its light.
Yet I am still black as night.
-Melanie Hertzler
Melanie, I really like your poem. You made a good choice to speak from inside the painting. You really convey a sense of aliveness in the painting through the voice and perspective of this poem. I like the way that you portray the dark figure as being able to see things both high and low, but at the same time it remains in shadow. The tall dark figure is actually a cypress tree. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteMelanie, I think of a little town when I read your poem. I can really connect your poem to the painting. Your use of words really describe the scene portrayed in the painting. You express so much peace and freshness.I can even imagine the wind and the smell of it. You really did a great job with your poem!
ReplyDeleteRocio
Melanie, I really like how you had the name of the painting in your poem. It made it seem more exciting like an inside joke. Very nice job :)
ReplyDeleteMelanie, your poem just made me think that everybody does look black in the dark of the night.
ReplyDeleteMelanie, you did an awesome job at connecting your poem and picture. I could see what you were describing before I even looked at the picture. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you spoke as if you were inside of the painting. You did a great job connecting the poem and the painting.
ReplyDeleteExcellent descriptions of what you are seeing from inside the painting, Melanie! I especially like this stanza:
ReplyDeleteTo the grass that
whispers in the breeze
and up to the highest belfry...
Well done!